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©2009 *DilsJ
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2nd attempt at the lyrics portrait idea

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Given 2009-05-23

mos def lyric portrait by *DilsJ (Suggested by =justjump and Featured by ^Sander-Seto)

Critiques


:iconmug25:
Although it's not the most original concept (what is nowadays though?) you did a spectacular job at achieving a real sense of depth.

When I listen to Mos Def's music, I get a multi-cultural vibe from different songs. I think you captured that in this piece by using different typefaces. There are a few typefaces in there that a traditional typography guru would gringe at (is that Mistral?).

I'd like to see it framed a little better, maybe some more black above his forehead and below his chin/neck.

Other than that, those few very minor things, I feel you did a spectacular job. If I were an instructor at a college of some sort, I'd totally give it an "A-".
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:iconfusionrock:
Excellently done! It looks as though this was done with a 3D rendering program, however I'm inclined to think that the depth is all in shading. Am I wrong? Either way, bravo.

The highlights in the eyes: are those words too? I'm assuming so. Brilliant.

This is a very original concept. I really don't see many flaws. I think that I'd have chosen different fonts, but that's not that big of a deal.

The first thing that I thought when I saw this as DD was, "Hey. That's Mos Def." So great job!

You should try this with other more prominent figures. I think you're on to something here.
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:iconscarletenvy:
I love this.
I have never seen anything like this before.
Very nice.

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I could feel myself slipping again-- across that
backward tilt.
When my emotion tried to match up with what I heard from others lips.
Spouting forth from foreign brains, ingraining into me.
:icondzinc:
Nice concept... :)
Similir with mine...
:iconannajacobs:
i really want to learn how to do this. great job, and great subject. mos def is great.
:iconmartonrobert:
Maaan... this is... awesome! Just... awesome!!!
:iconnameless07:
wow.... awesome.... :+fav:
:iconpiedrapapelotijera:
that's really great! can you give me some tips to make something like that?
:iconmytharcana:
That is really great work and nice shaping with the text! Very creative and well done design! Excellent work and congratulations on the DD!

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:iconadamnielsen:
Well deserved dude, great work, he shoulda used that for the Black on Both Sides cover.

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:iconrhodolite:
Awesome! :D
The execution is just amazing...:wow:
:XD:

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Illusions of fantasy,
And sometimes reality...

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